You have made a very good start here and have covered everything necessary in a good amount of detail, using terms correctly.
To improve: - add a print screen of TV listings for when you would want your new advert to be aired - add a slide for your new audience and use all of the relevant terms. Then, think very carefully about your new audience and whether this is viable (I think you need to tweak the age...) - either highlight specific lines of the BCAP code or pick more suitable sections to link to your proposed advert
Laura,
ReplyDeleteYou have made a very good start here and have covered everything necessary in a good amount of detail, using terms correctly.
To improve:
- add a print screen of TV listings for when you would want your new advert to be aired
- add a slide for your new audience and use all of the relevant terms. Then, think very carefully about your new audience and whether this is viable (I think you need to tweak the age...)
- either highlight specific lines of the BCAP code or pick more suitable sections to link to your proposed advert
Ellie
TV advert analysis:
ReplyDeleteLaura,
You still need more on the codes and conventions of the advert and you need to add details of Ofcom and the ASA and how they regulate TV advertising.
Ellie